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   M on October 14, 2020 at 11:40 pm

   Not having had a “lasting” experience of romance, I’m too jaded to imagine marking oneself for life over another person, unless it’s one’s offspring. Such relationships go haywire all the time, too, but the feelings never end (I am guessing) for a parent. Your poem is as notable as it is thought-provoking

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   Miss Sharon on October 15, 2020 at 12:05 am

   Beautifully written, my dear. I love the sound and “feel” of this. ~Sharon

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   Christina S. on October 15, 2020 at 12:07 am

   Good morning Kira, these short lines are not short on impact. They are incredibly beautiful. If someone had your heart and soul, what more could they possibly have wanted?

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   E.N. on October 15, 2020 at 12:07 am

   beautiful pic .. enchanting love’s poem says i! from the ashes her scroll .. stunning says i .. nothing more victorious than bouncing back from the ashes of brokenness .. and pain .. i like this one a lot .. says so much in just those 4 lines .. well done!
   E.
   ps. great title as well!

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   William Blackwell on October 15, 2020 at 5:26 pm

   The essence. Nice

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   M.A. on October 15, 2020 at 5:27 pm

   Heartfelt very beautiful

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