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   Destiny Rose on March 5, 2020 at 11:30 am

   This is so inspirational Kira

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   Words Of Famine on March 5, 2020 at 11:31 am

   Kira, I absolutely love this sensory imbued piece! There’s so much more going on in the subtext here and the artwork is as stunning as the piece! May I reshare with your permission?

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   Patrick on March 5, 2020 at 11:32 am

   Love this it has a sensuality to it! And the picture is beautiful! 👏🌷

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   Philippe dit Fifi on March 5, 2020 at 11:33 am

   Dans sa vigne gorgée,
   De fruits sensuels,
   Son regard a fusé,
   Sucré de désirs.

   Silhouette saillante,
   Décore la fenêtre,
   Silhouette dénudée,
   Premier rayon de soleil.

   De belles lignes qui décrivent la sensualité Kira Elles o,t réveillé mon imagination.🙇♂🙇♂🙇♂

   In his mouthful vine,
   Sensual fruit,
   His gaze flared,
   Sweet with desires.

   Protruding silhouette,
   Decorate the window,
   Naked silhouette,
   First ray of sunshine.

   Beautiful lines that describe sensuality Kira They too awakened my imagination.

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   باك لينك on March 7, 2020 at 3:13 pm

   Hi there, I check your new stuff daily. Your writing style is awesome, keep it up!

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   Tabassum Tahmina Shagufta Hussein on March 8, 2020 at 12:10 am

   Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Regards n Happy week-end wishes

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   Maurice on March 24, 2020 at 11:10 am

   Love the picture!

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   Araceli Cofield on August 31, 2020 at 2:50 pm

   Hello Poetess Kira,

   I love this piece, looks so dainty to me even scantily clad. I saw your art work, too.
   Araceli🌹 Nicely done.

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9. 

   Divya Kotian on August 31, 2020 at 2:52 pm

   Nicely done. Keep going. Enjoyed reading it. Intense and deep thoughts

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    Laz K. on August 31, 2020 at 11:41 pm

    This is my new favorite love poem!
    It’s secretive, spontaneous, and honest.
    Well, that’s how it makes me feel, anyway.
    Very nice!

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    Phill Oz O'fee on September 1, 2020 at 11:19 am

    … if only he looked up from his toil…!!! Loved the intrigue and mystery of the stanza flow and wordplay.. great poem my friend! 🙂

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12. 

    Sami Khalil on September 2, 2020 at 7:33 pm

    Style is awesome in its shortness but richness of meaning. You seem professional in what you do.

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13. 

    Ana Papaya on September 2, 2020 at 7:34 pm

    I like the art, Kira. And the poem accompanies it so perfectly.
    Captures a moment of quiet inspiration.

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    Pat on September 2, 2020 at 8:30 pm

    When our Grape Vines mature… I must remember
    your poem and send my Lover out to gather Grapes.
    I read that the Romans always had lots of Grapes at their Tables
    on the huge Verandas where they enjoyed Romance.
    Through the Centuries… Grapes are made into Wine.
    Very seductive poem. truly, Pat

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    Papa Mama Jama on September 13, 2020 at 1:17 pm

    Excellent writing, ‘the pale of the day blushed’ awesome wordsmithing ! Geat Post

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16. 

    G. on September 17, 2020 at 6:13 pm

    Nowt better than having a scantily dressed woman watching you plucking, makes the morning glory so much more glorious 🙂

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17. 

    Paul on September 28, 2020 at 9:21 pm

    Awesome!

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