Suddenly I feel alive
the dreary days
vanished—
now every speck sparkles
with anticipation
for your words
to churn my womb
and tingle my skin
in sizzlin’ shivers of excitement
I thought were long lost
and would never return again.
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©Yakira Shimoni Fulks
August 12, 2020 | OC, California
I Want to Love you | Under the Moonlight
The innate feelings of roses unfolding appear
when two stars collide and the firmament is
persuaded to burst into an array of fireworks
that cause an avalanche of awakenings.
An Oscar winning poemette. truly, Pat
Wonderfully written. It starts out with such positivity and ends with hope.
The opening lines are fantastic,
“Suddenly I feel alive
the dreary days
vanished”
When we feel alive, there is a rush of energy, there is a sense of excitement, there is a hope for the better in anticipation of better times ahead. Very well expressed and captured.
The art is beautiful as well. I like the vibrant strokes and colors 🙂
Thank you Kira for sharing this write.
We need someone to make us feel alive dear Kira.
“now every speck sparkles
with anticipation
for your words
to churn my womb
and tingle my skin”
I liked the above lines. Best days are when love is our reason to be alive. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like.
Not sure who is being addressed here, but they must be special indeed to bring forth such sentiments. That this being could “churn my womb” by mere words and cause feelings of excitement that were thought long lost indicates a romantic interest. I wonder what it feels like to have your womb churned.
I am thinking, lucky Kira. To get that tingle again when you least expect it, is quite something. Nurture it dear poet. Like a candle in a draft, protect it and keep it burning. All good wishes.